Thursday, 12 May 2016

a rat jamped on a cat and the cat tried to eat the rat got eatin

2 comments:

  1. cool blog
    can you keep on posting stuff on your blog you could get behind
    cool blog thowe luc

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  2. Hi! Luc,

    You have an idea for your poetry topic. However I think you have yet to understand what a poem is, including setting out. See me and we can discuss formatting, how to include description and the importance of punctuation. As it stands I don't think this one would qualify as a completed poem.
    Regards,
    Mr Corlett

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