Tuesday, 23 August 2016

persasive writing

I THINK WE SHOULD HAVE SCIENTISTS  TO MAKE AN INVISIBILITY POTION BAT SOME PEOPLE THINK IT IS A BAD IDEA LET ME TelL YOU WHY IT IS A GOOD IDEA  U CAN GO HUNTING WITH IT  AND GO INVISIBLE AND THEN U CAN SNEAK UP ON DEER AND PIGS AND THEY WON'T SEE YOU coming and u will have a lot o’v meat to eat that u will have cached.
Also  u don’t need to do your work mr corllet won't see me
The next reason is if u are invisible you can snack food out the cabid if u are starving like i am now
Finally  IF SOMEONE was casing you/you CAN DRINK the potion and he won't babil to catch u  
For those reasons sore you'll agree with me

3 comments:

  1. good piece of writing but next time use a dictionary, but i agree with you

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  2. Nicee work on the story,
    Double check the story to make sure it makes sense,
    Good work If you ever want help with your writing I can always help.

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  3. good work I agree with you but check your spelling and I can always be a helping hand if you need it. :P

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